Wednesday, February 18, 2009

I Need Advice!

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This is my Poster Design for our Graphic Design class. I need some feedback before class at 1 today. Tell me what you like or what you think I could fix. Yes, I have to have all that info on there. Blah Blah Blah. Just critique it for me please! Preferably before noon....

3 comments:

K. said...

im really loving the images of the shanty and paper cranes.. but i kind of question the type, its sort of hard to read.

but i really do like this. you did an amazing job.

Sarah Julson said...

Yeah, it's supposed to be a commemorative poster rather than promotional, and we're supposed to have a hierarchy of info, so I achieved that by making it dark to really light. I wanted the focus to be on the image, not the text (cause I think it's kind of unnecessary to have ALL that!) But yeah, I was kind of going for hard-to-read. Haha So good! Thanks for the feedback!

ethanholbrook said...

I know this is after class and all that... sorry...

but... the only thing I would say is I feel like you are teasing me with the cranes. They are interesting and dynamic but there's only a couple up in the corner. everything else is pretty dandy though, coming from the perspective of a dude who don't know much about any of that.